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AVG. SALARY

$68,480

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EDUCATION

Bachelor's degree

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JOB OUTLOOK

Decreasing

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Real-Life Communication -- Solution

You could say something like this:

Mercury is the closest planet to the sun, followed by Venus. Earth is the third planet from the sun. After Earth is Mars, then the gas giants.

You could tell the author something like this: I took out some extra words and reorganized your sentences so they flowed as smoother thoughts. I kept it as clear and concise as possible. Don't forget to read your writing out loud after you finish up; sometimes that can make a huge difference.